Very Good !!!
So, nice piece here.
The Intro is perfect, nothing about.
The percussion/drums are nice as well.
Just one little thing (what is not even your fault), the strings sound deplaced.
In acoustic song like this beauty here, synthetic sounding strings just don't fit.
(even if they are well composed:))
I personally prefer the piano. Calm and flowing, how it needs to be.
Nothin' more to say. Great Song !
Keep continuing with composing :)
MusicBox (I'm called James aswell, by the way)